The Ranchers' Submissive Old School Ranchers Series Book 1 edition by Jane Pearl Literature Fiction eBooks
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Pregnant Anna left her husband Cole thirteen years ago because he’d wanted to share her with his brother. Now she needs his help in order to keep their son out of Juvenile Detention. Surprisingly he still wants her back and will let her see their son if she agrees to be a submissive wife to him and his brother Lance! She knows that the two of them will expect total obedience from her in all matters. Will she be able to succumb to their demands without losing herself?
(This is a work of erotica. It contains explicit sexual scenes. It is not intended for readers under 18 years old.)
The Ranchers' Submissive Old School Ranchers Series Book 1 edition by Jane Pearl Literature Fiction eBooks
This review will contain SPOILERS -- don't read it if you don't like SPOILERS.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
When I first began reading the book I thought it had potential. However, rapidly it went downhill. The man Cole was in the past when he and Anna met and married was a totally different person in the present. Let me say from the start that Anna was wrong to keep their son away and not let Cole know he was a father. That was a huge mistake on her part and I am not cutting her any slack with that. Having said that, that is the only thing that I can "blame" her for. Everything else lies with Cole.
Cole was deceitful and a liar. When they were dating he said that wanted to control her when it came to her safety and to s**. She agreed to that. They married, went on honeymoon and were living together as man and wife for at least six weeks and he didn't say one word about his church or their practices. Cole didn't say anything to Anna about how his family and others in the area "shared" wives. When the young married Anna was somewhat attracted to Cole's brother Lance, he welcomed it saying he would share her with Lance -- that's when she ran away -- knowing she was already pregnant with Cole's child.
In the present time, Anna called Cole because their son was in trouble. Cole agreed to help but he blackmailed her. Told her that she had to accept both Cole and his brother Lance as her husband or she would have no contact with her son. Of course she agreed. It doesn't matter that eventually she fell in love with Lance also and loved having both Cole and Lance as her husbands. She was not given a choice - she was blackmailed into this.
Cole lied when he told her he only wanted to control her when it came to her safety and to s**. When Anna and their son arrived at the ranch, the son was put in lodging with other hands from the ranch. Really? Cole just met his son and had years to make up for -- getting to know him. Instead of taking him to the ranch so that they could bond and get to know each other he leaves him about a half an hour from the main house. The reason for this was so that he and his brother Lance could "train" Anna on the type of wife they expected her to be. So much for controlling only certain aspects of her life. They took TOTAL CONTROL over everything -- her clothing, her cell phone, her eating, everything. In the BDSM world, she was no longer just a submissive she was a slave -- but they didn't use those words.
It had been over 12 years since she had seen Cole. Yet she was expected to just jump in the sack with him and his brother whenever they wanted. During the training they put her in sky high heels and made her wear them all day long as she did the housework. The next day, she had to continue wearing them. What the ................. Anna only wore boots and sneakers for years. There is no way that someone like her could all of a sudden wear sky high heels all day and not keel over. On a certain level, that was physical abuse. Has the author every worn sky high heels? Could she wear them day in and day out without a break? I think not.
Her old college roommate saw her and said that she looked like a "stepford wife" -- and actually she did.
On top of all of that, there were editing mistakes. In a scene where she was with Lance, all of a sudden she was with Cole and then back with Lance. Cole was in a different part of the house. Of course, the scene was with Lance throughout. In another part of the book she was with her sister-in-law Gwen -- but during the scene -- Gwen's name was used when it should have been Anna's. These type of mistakes should be caught by a proof reader.
This story had potential but it fizzled.
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The Ranchers' Submissive Old School Ranchers Series Book 1 edition by Jane Pearl Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
i had to read both stories from Ms Pearl..she really did a great job with her characters.......
This book was in my opinion not good and boring..If you want to read this subject matter, try one of Lora Leigh's books..They are very well written and so much better
did not finish... mean men, with no character development
Girl meets boy ,they marry,8 weeks later he informs her he will be sharing her with his brother,we're into menages he informs her you'll be his(brother) wife too!
she flees without telling husband she pregnant,15yrs later she comes back because son is turning into a criminal,husband tells her you'll be our wife & submissive,or you lose all custody rights.
This book is not about a bdsm ,but coercing ,they forced her into staying ,like a fool, she doesn't seem too understand the law would be on her side,this book made no sense.I was quite put-out with this story. the writer should go back ,take out the lies and sneakiness of the brothers and give the girl a brain.
My only complaint was that sometimes Lance was with her but the author would accidentally say Cole....therefore making me read passage several times thinking I had missed something. I still have hard time with the concept but curiosity brings me back
Just finished this book and found it to be extremely hot and well written! I re-read previous reviews and either I read a different book or it has been rewritten...can't imagine how readers could have missed the storyline. It had a past, present, and epilogue all showing the submissive personality and how she grew to accept it. Granted, the years were skimmed over but points with explanations given. She was threatened, may have felt scared and cornered, but think of real life... Have you never felt like you have no choice and it is only later you realize you really did? I believe, based on my perception of the story, she wanted to be with her husband and his brother and was given a good reason to reopen the door. If she was told years previously, in advance, the community she was entering......ahhhh, but then the author would not have a story to tell!!! )
So here's the deal, I don't necessarily disagree with the other lukewarm reviews. There isn't a ton of character development. The storyline is unrealistic. The heroine has rocks in her head. However, this is listed as adult erotica and that is exactly what it is. Actually it's porn really. So raw are the sex scenes and language in this book, I felt certain it couldn't have been written by a woman, but it was. It isn't super deep, but it is fairly well edited for the genre. This isn't fine literature but I doubt that's what anyone buying this book is looking for. If you are looking for down and dirty domination-ménage sex then that is exactly what this is. Heavy on the raunch and lite on pretty much everything else, including romance. I'm pretty sure the author took a stab at trying to give this story a romantic slant, but it was just so blatantly graphic the romance didn't really register. lots of use of the "C" word, lots, and lots of reference to bodily fluids, not for the faint of heart. I cannot possibly give this book anything less than a 5 star rating because this book delivers EXACTLY what it promises and that's the simple truth. If you like extreme language and sexual descriptions you will probably like this book.
This review will contain SPOILERS -- don't read it if you don't like SPOILERS.
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When I first began reading the book I thought it had potential. However, rapidly it went downhill. The man Cole was in the past when he and Anna met and married was a totally different person in the present. Let me say from the start that Anna was wrong to keep their son away and not let Cole know he was a father. That was a huge mistake on her part and I am not cutting her any slack with that. Having said that, that is the only thing that I can "blame" her for. Everything else lies with Cole.
Cole was deceitful and a liar. When they were dating he said that wanted to control her when it came to her safety and to s**. She agreed to that. They married, went on honeymoon and were living together as man and wife for at least six weeks and he didn't say one word about his church or their practices. Cole didn't say anything to Anna about how his family and others in the area "shared" wives. When the young married Anna was somewhat attracted to Cole's brother Lance, he welcomed it saying he would share her with Lance -- that's when she ran away -- knowing she was already pregnant with Cole's child.
In the present time, Anna called Cole because their son was in trouble. Cole agreed to help but he blackmailed her. Told her that she had to accept both Cole and his brother Lance as her husband or she would have no contact with her son. Of course she agreed. It doesn't matter that eventually she fell in love with Lance also and loved having both Cole and Lance as her husbands. She was not given a choice - she was blackmailed into this.
Cole lied when he told her he only wanted to control her when it came to her safety and to s**. When Anna and their son arrived at the ranch, the son was put in lodging with other hands from the ranch. Really? Cole just met his son and had years to make up for -- getting to know him. Instead of taking him to the ranch so that they could bond and get to know each other he leaves him about a half an hour from the main house. The reason for this was so that he and his brother Lance could "train" Anna on the type of wife they expected her to be. So much for controlling only certain aspects of her life. They took TOTAL CONTROL over everything -- her clothing, her cell phone, her eating, everything. In the BDSM world, she was no longer just a submissive she was a slave -- but they didn't use those words.
It had been over 12 years since she had seen Cole. Yet she was expected to just jump in the sack with him and his brother whenever they wanted. During the training they put her in sky high heels and made her wear them all day long as she did the housework. The next day, she had to continue wearing them. What the ................. Anna only wore boots and sneakers for years. There is no way that someone like her could all of a sudden wear sky high heels all day and not keel over. On a certain level, that was physical abuse. Has the author every worn sky high heels? Could she wear them day in and day out without a break? I think not.
Her old college roommate saw her and said that she looked like a "stepford wife" -- and actually she did.
On top of all of that, there were editing mistakes. In a scene where she was with Lance, all of a sudden she was with Cole and then back with Lance. Cole was in a different part of the house. Of course, the scene was with Lance throughout. In another part of the book she was with her sister-in-law Gwen -- but during the scene -- Gwen's name was used when it should have been Anna's. These type of mistakes should be caught by a proof reader.
This story had potential but it fizzled.
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